John
Well-known member
I'll drop my two cents in for what it's worth. Let me start out by saying that it's good to see 'out of the box' thinking so to speak however I think this design is hurting in several area's:
1 - Inconsistant use of fonts
2 - Poor color combinations
3 - Imagery that doesn't give meaning to the look (icons that don't seem to have any relationship to one another)
4 - Hard to read area's of the design, ie; navbar
I actually could go on but you get the idea. I hate to be so critical and it's certainly not meant to be personal but if you were my student, I'd ask you what are you trying to accomplish with this design? Essentially it's all over the place but doesn't convey any meaning to me - it looks unplanned and rushed. I really think it could be a lot better
1 - Inconsistant use of fonts
2 - Poor color combinations
3 - Imagery that doesn't give meaning to the look (icons that don't seem to have any relationship to one another)
4 - Hard to read area's of the design, ie; navbar
I actually could go on but you get the idea. I hate to be so critical and it's certainly not meant to be personal but if you were my student, I'd ask you what are you trying to accomplish with this design? Essentially it's all over the place but doesn't convey any meaning to me - it looks unplanned and rushed. I really think it could be a lot better